Black Poetry : loveshort #3

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...everythang.

    say baby—
    can i be your slave?

    nawl… nawl…

    …let me be the entity
    inhabiting your
    daytime/nighttime/foralltime
    dreams… the one
    whose essence flows
    lingering-ly thru the
    metaphoric stream of
    your conscious thoughts
    …let me be the thing
    your fine *** can’t seem
    to breathe without
    the one whose existence
    singlehanded-ly dictates
    the rate of your heartbeat
    i just want to be…
    i need to be…

    (fukk it!)

    i want to be the
    only one you come for.


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. alyce

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    sho you right....(all of what you said, but especially that last line...heyelll jeeeah!)

    sho you right, sista/girl! sho you right! :heart:

    alyce
     
  3. Euphoria

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    Wow. As always Sunshyne you leave me to sit and stare at your words in admiration. Great piece as usual.
    *Emma*
     
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    Umm Hmm...

    That's all I'ma say!!!!

    You know how this is...

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    These Love Shorts...

    R off the **** hook Sis!! Ooooooweeee!! Tell me more...:)
     
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    a-ha! trying to be the one huh? i can dig it...shout it from the rooftops!

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  7. shaz

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    spit that poetry "(fukk it)"
    you sho dont want much do you (lol)
    I really dig this one
     
  8. MsBerry_98

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    Hot ****!!!!

    That's :hot: like fire!!!!
     
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    AlwaysThanks! i was feelin' a lil' "ghettofabuLiss"
    (as Sherrie would say) when i wrote dis one! :D but!
    i see i'm not alone... ya'll are just as bad as me. :)
     
  10. ICON

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    umm umm umm

    umm umm umm
     
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