Black Poetry : loveshort #2

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    …musing.

    i like the thoughts
    you’re giving me
    you’re moving me
    ceaseless-ly
    with those…
    sweet/wet/deep
    conversation kisses
    gent-ly mixed with
    mind blowing
    erotic images…
    & all of this is
    soft-ly accentuated
    by your
    BeautifulBlackMan
    countenance…
    & i won’t lie
    … i could lie beneath
    the sensual shower
    that emanates from our
    collective vibe
    & amorous-ly abide
    for infinite lifetimes

    (you get me that way.)


    © SunShyneOyrgynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep comin

    with your shorts, GA_Sunshyne. Please.

    Bert
     
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    and to that we spin
    chimed discs of destiny
    together as a breeze of light
    shining down upon rainfallen kisses

    ah-ha! inspiring me girl, i can dig it...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  4. OneTyme.

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    Umm Hmmm...

    This is on point...I'm Lovin it!!
    Thanks:heart:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweetfriendofmyne!!!...this piece is tyght. i'm lovin' the flow of it as well, because it simply floats. but uhh, you mus already know, dear friend(?). i'm still watchin'...keep doing this love poetry thang, i'm always lovin' it, yes indeed.


    ~~~jusletitflo~~~
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** yeah Elayne,

    This short **** is :hot:!!!!!

    Lovin' ery minute of it!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks!


    ...you guys continuous-ly make me shyne. :)

    & i had no idea just how much i appreciated your
    love until recent-ly. there is neva eva eva any
    place like home. itsallLove & thanks... Again!! :)
     
  8. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice work Sunshyne.
    Love the last line best.
    *Emma*
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emma. thanks for always being so sweet!! :heart:
     
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    now my eyes are

    glued to this screen...

    anticipating loveshort #3

    feelin the :love: in here

    :D
     
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