Black Poetry : loveshort #1

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...late-ly.

    late-ly i’ve been
    feelin’ like—
    every Love joynt
    i’ve ever lit was
    quintessential-ly
    meant for U…

    (long before i
    knew U existed
    )

    years before we
    even met
    months before our
    first kiss
    weeks before U
    stole my soul
    days before i
    experienced the
    sheer magnificence
    of your touch

    ...& i am
    moments away
    from telling U
    that i have fallen
    in Love.


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey now!!!!

    This love short is the first of many, many more shorts I hope...

    Short, long; all yo **** is straight like that!!!!

    You know how you do!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who loves you?
    Who doesn't know that they love you yet?
    Who hasn't felt what you have felt yet?
    Who?

    Dat's my response to that short de're!!! Shawty.
     
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    a nice, happy and refreshing short piece.
    Love your words as always Sunshyne.

    *Emma*
     
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    PURE SWEETNESS!!

    And that's all I have to say!! Sweet!!:heart:
     
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    fallin hard and fast
    touching true grace
    leaving passion dust
    all over the place...this is nice!

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  7. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    auite mslady-
    some hot sh*t.
    but u din hafta put our bi'ness out in da
    street like that. :)

    hw
     
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    :)

    That's niiiiiiiice. Me likey!

    :heart:
     
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    kinda of a short piece for you but it didnt take anything from it. great post like always just wanted to let you know i was still lurking on the site every now and then to see you work
     
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    you guys are soooooo good to me!! :D
    thanks for the constant Love! :heart:

    & Ga_Boi ...sometimes, you jess cain't
    keep it to yaself!! know what i mean?? :lol:
    LP ...keep checkin' on me!! dats a sweet
    thang!! :D
     
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