Black Poetry : Love's ***** - uncut

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by etcetera, Jul 28, 2002.

  1. etcetera

    etcetera Member MEMBER

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    I'm Love's *****.
    He pimps me and leaves me sick.
    So blue, bruised, and battered.
    Doesn't give a f__k about the heart he shatters.
    I am just another notch on the belt.
    He felt the p____y, but it was his heart I felt.
    His soothing words made my body melt.
    Under his spell, I fell.
    Fell deep down into a black ditch.
    I can't move or get out.
    Because I am his *****.
    He controls me.
    Does he mold me?
    Hell yea.
    He gives me my complete shape.
    Because without Love, I am Hate's bait.
    He knows I can't go anywhere, and so he leaves me stranded.
    Stranded with a capital "B" on my chest branded.
    Free me! Free me!
    Let me discover and find the real Love.
    You cannot be him.
    So remove your masks and your gloves.
    Love wouldn't hurt me or touch me so wrongly.
    Love wouldn't pimp me, degrade me, or harm me.
    But they who doubted Jesus was also wrong.
    So you might very well be the real Love, and not a con.
    But if you are? and this is how it's supposed to be?
    F___K LOVE...you are my number one enemy.

    -Etcetera, the Realist
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm.

    a realist knows where and when to get off the soap box.:)...sort of speak. if you know he's not the one...move on. get beyond the rethoric of what has been...and get to the part where man and woman becomes one.

    not a *****
    not to be used...abused...misused.
    not to be mold or controled by another
    not to be branded and left stranded by the ever growing sea of PLEASE DON'T BELITTLE ME.

    true love is out there.

    FIND IT.:)

    by the way, unique flow.

    WELCOME TO THE PLAY GROUND.
     
  3. etcetera

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    thanks a lot :)

    being that I am a realist...and I speak about real situations...not everyone has found that "fairytale" love yet. yes...it's out there...but you don't find the situation...the situation comes to you. i write all kinds of poetry...for everyone...things folks don't talk about and the likes. thanks for the comments though and i am loved :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my comment wasn't meant to be NEGATIVE, etcetera. i hope you weren't offended.:)

    let the river flow.
     
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    etcetera Member MEMBER

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    not at all lol. i was just shining some light just in case you misunderstood the purpose of the poem. even if it was negative...i wouldn't have taken offense :)
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most definatley felt this one ......sometimes love can treat you like a *****

    but sometimes you have to kiss a few toads before you can get to your prince ( or visey versey:D )


    tight flow
     
  7. etcetera

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    veryyy true. thanks :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love is grand but some time it take ya by da hand
    true love is their it will not walk to u but when
    it come knocking let it in .......coz love can be a real [email protected]!!!!!
     
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    lol - amen.
     
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    Love DOn't Love No One!

    Spinners said it and Phil Perry came back wid it--love don't love nobody--it makes fools of us all, but I felt your flow and I know the role--been there and certainly worked both sides and it ain't funny, 'cept when we stand back back and have to laugh at ourselves because it's like it ain't us--Amun-Ra

    :)
     
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