Black Poetry : Loves Throne!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetic Justice, May 26, 2005.

  1. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loves Throne!

    Mesmerized by the power, angry until then, wanting it to end and needing the skin, draped in throb, scared of touch, knowing the feel will have its way, knowing the feel with make me sway, hips cursed to plunge into the folds of loves savage throne.
    Throne so powerful in its blackness, standing tall in its resolve to claim the silk thats wons its crown, Feeling the royality of the need, knowing the loyality as the smell of the promised seed speaks its language unto thee.
    Glistening to the rythm of the nation unfolding and lieing in its free spell until the throne finds its silky home and thrust his heavenly sword there!
    Screams of outcry befall, For the sword struck its promise and laughed unto then, and knew by the hips that he would win, plunging and thrusting unto the night, thirsty for all within this fight, Striking and striking until the walls caved in, feeling the eruption before it began, tightening against the bare of the throne, lifting the sword straight to the home, grabbing the fruits of gods savage blend and burying sweet tongues within, laughing into the twist steady until ye bliss, bliss away unto the then, ready and willing to sit on the throne again.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Poetic
    I really do enjoy
    The elegance way your words
    Touch the canvas
    Nice vibes


    Peace
     
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    that was something right there
    the story took me in....
    the path of a king unknown....
    carves a way to his throne...
    keep writing...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful as i was cascading inside it
    flow on !
     
  5. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello everyone,
    Let me let you in on a little secret, i was discussing something all men have and all women enjoy.
     
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    Peace sister :wave:
    I dont think the point was missed from this story lol
    cause shooo i got it ;)
    But I was curious was there a reason why you wrote it more like a story?
    It was a steamy read regardless :)
     
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