Black Poetry : Love's Single Breath

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Feb 25, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The energy built up inside of me
    almost to the point where I
    couldn't stand it

    I had to release it; but how?

    Not knowing what to do
    or even what to say, I let
    my chest expand because
    I was at such a lost for words

    The paradigm of female
    perfection slowdanced into
    my existence and obstructed
    my airwaves with graceful
    purpose

    Unable to withstand it any longer;
    I expelled the most wonderful,
    beautiful, and gentlest
    flow of understanding
    from my sparsely
    parted lips

    I felt it surround me at
    that moment

    I enjoyed the sensation of
    what it was…

    Terry called it an

    E~X~H~A~L~E

    I accepted it as

    L~O~V~E

    ©GQINC2K2​
     
  2. MsBerry_98

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    GQ... lovely work! One question, though... is that a normal male reaction/response to L~O~V~E?
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ok ok ok feeling ya man
    playa status dawg #1

    paradigm?

    thanks for teaching me a new word too.
    i like that
    but don't have me pulling out the dictionary too much man
    ha ha
    peace playa GQ

    feeling this here man
    4 real

    dssNY
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    ummm... very very nice my dear! :D

    would it be too forward if i say that as you
    exhale... i'm breathing you in to me?
    (i was just wonderin')

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is soooooo G Q ish ~ :) and I love it! :)

    N2
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsBerry - Asked and answered... :wink:

    So'Ja - It's called love language bro!!! :toast:

    BlakGurl - Take me in; I am yours!!!! :heart:

    N2 - I do what I do because of Queens like you!!! :love:

    Thanks for the read folks!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ man ya love and smoove flow got da ladies all worked up!
    i'll sit back and watch ya.....tyght man
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Learning from you $R!!!!!

    Thankin' ya bro!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    no way )))) it's all about u ......but if u need help wit some
    of dem ladies call me.......
     
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    Enjoyable piece. Nicely ended.

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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