Black Poetry : Love's Rushing in...

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  1. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love’s Rushing in…

    Travelling at 186,000 miles per second
    is the light in the night from Lightning
    which blasts the molecules of air apart
    to create a vacuum most frightening.
    But it’s not heated air being pushed apart
    that makes that clamorous din.
    After Lightning has struck
    and the vacuum collapses,
    Thunder is the air rushing in.

    And the X-chromosome lies waiting alive
    in the female egg with grace
    for the first sperm penetrating its membrane
    bringing spark for a Life to embrace.
    If an X sperm is first, it will be a girl.
    If a Y, it’s a boy to win.
    And it’s not your choice or mine but God’s
    that gender is the sperm rushing in.

    When one Heart is enraptured by another
    and they both hold their breaths in the night
    and the vacuum between them draws closer
    for one heartbeat at the speed of Light,
    all Thunder heard then at the speed of sound
    on a whisper of air so thin
    at 11 hundred and 29 feet per second
    is the blast of Love rushing in.


    Namyh
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely done
     
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    Rich - So glad you enjoyed the Rush. Namyh
     
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    I enjoyed the entire piece, but this verse gave me a rush
    not in the sense of the action, but in feelings souldeep!

    Thanks Harry for continuing to share your amazing gift with us! :)

    Coco :dance:
     
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    as always, the imagery draws you in, as the storyline moves you along its journey...'til love rushes in.

    still drawing from that data base of wOnDeRfUl, Mr. Hyman.

    Here's to hoping your memory banks never run dry.:toast:
     
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    Man the rush was deep and massive
     
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    Coco - It's a definite boost to my male ego when a member of the fairer sex feels the crafted words reach souldeep as intended. Now that's an action that gives a Rush and I thank you for it. So very glad you felt this Coco and it was enjoyed. Namyh
     
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    Baller - When you add a cup of human Chemistry seething at human blowtorch temperatures, a tablespoon of particle Physics loaded with centrifugal kiss impacts and a pinch of Biology with runaway firing
    synapses, you get Love every time, a mix of both romance that lights up your smile and science that lets you know the thunder got through too. Hallelujah! Thanks for spendin’ a spell baller. Namyh
     
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