Quiet Poetry Lounge : love's quicksand (Haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Oct 24, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for those who know the difference between "unwilling" & "unable" in the quicksand of love.....


    sinking was so easy
    both "unwilling" to get out
    they're "unable", now


    Alyce (c) 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unwilling & unable

    stable me to know da different
    Alyce ya move me wit this here.....;)
     
  3. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, Alyce

    I know what it's like to slip silently, softly, subtly underneath the stubborn stronghold of "unwilling" into the helplessness of "unable"...

    You capture it well... talk what you know :heart:

    J
     
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