Black Poetry : Love's Obssession

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Monetary, Apr 8, 2004.

  1. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Was it like Romeo and Juliet?
    Hell naw, I wasn't there yet

    But, she had my mind
    My strength, I couldn't find

    She had me all confused
    Hell, her sashay was on auto-cruise

    Her presence, her essence, even her perfume
    Her loveliness, her finesse...spiritually, my heart was in bloom

    See, a cool brotha once said that I shouldn't beg
    But, this Black woman right here, had me drunk like a souped-up keg

    She had a brotha on lock and I didn't even know her name
    She didn’t know me, but her, I was willing to claim

    Was she an illusion?
    Did she create this confusion?

    Then, it hit me like a wall
    I fell to my knees ya’ll

    And to myself, I made this confession
    She is my one and only Love’s Obsession

    By Monetary
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight
    likes the way you posed this
    flow on.....
    thanks for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving this a lot
    :jumping: this poem is hot
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like she has got cha all caught up. Enjoyed reading this, money, write some more.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was awesome flowing tyte drop bruh !!
    flow on more of dis here
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    Hmmmm! Obsession at first sight!
    Bet you did'nt believe it could happen like that.
    Tyte flow Mr.Monetary!
     
  7. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Everyone...

    thanks for your replies.

    PurpleMoons...where you been, sweetie? :kiss:
     
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    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats cool Money you could put my name on their!!!! LOL I do not care dawg!!!!! Nice Poem my man.
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heeeeeeeeey Moooooooooooney :kiss:

    I got a chance to hear you read this last night, but came to read and reply ..
    Money, this was fly!!!!!!!

    P.S.
    Money
    my stomach is still hurting from laffin @ you lastnight....lololol
    peace
    Nita
    :heart:
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh you are flowing indeed moneyyyyyy
    love this
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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