Black Poetry : LOVE'S NUBIAN GODDESS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From the rapture
    of her beauty
    i'm captured
    inside the whisper
    of her tone voice

    where my heart lay
    inside her spinnerster
    she like the out cast
    of the spoke vow
    and the bliss of smile
    i stand in the moment
    watching

    from the silent touch
    to the loud emotion
    i cry in the chambers
    of her beings
    love's nubian goddess

    her hair of coal black
    and skin of golden
    the curves of away
    she pose a beauty
    unknown and a
    whisper not heard
    yet in my mind & vision
    i see her before me
    like the river pools of
    hope i reach to touch

    spraying poetic water
    so she bloom & blossome
    as she rise up fully
    my heart race i come
    to the end of the stanza
    and i all know is love
    so in every tear i leave
    a stain
    may she feel the notion
    of my whispers and the
    heart that beats rapidly
    and the mind that open
    she is the
    NUBIAN GODDESS OF RAPTURE
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my this is oh my..
    i love this
    MY RICHNESS
    dis right here....

    from the silent touch
    to the loud emotion
    i cry in the chambers
    of her beings
    love's nubian goddess

    the vibe is so strong.......:heart:
    much love on dis right here...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    then i dont know

    spraying poetic water
    so she bloom & blossome
    as she rise up fully
    my heart race i come
    to the end of the stanza

    rings a bell
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spraying poetic water
    so she bloom & blossome
    as she rise up fully
    my heart race i come
    to the end of the stanza
    and i all know is love
    so in every tear i leave
    a stain
    may she feel the notion
    of my whispers and the
    heart that beats rapidly
    and the mind that open
    she is the
    NUBIAN GODDESS OF RAPTURE



    WOW...this says it all
     
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    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep really really deep
     
  7. nemasis119

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    hey $$rich$$ this was hot, I read it to a young lady over the phone and she automatically started asking where was I reading from!!!! loved it bro!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    blkangel thanks it was the mental mind of notion in motion

    angelicsage.....it was da heart speaking loud thankz

    skindeep & whisper......big thankz y'all for the love here

    Nemasis......word she like'd it huh .....happy dis was felt
    like i was feelin when i wrote it ...peace thankz
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well it was just a wonderful piece...notion of a motion....hmmmmm dreamy
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man......................







    that means like this was beautifull :smile:




    Love L
     
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