Black Poetry : Loves Mystery

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Empty and alone
    But da loves there
    lost soul in da night..
    but the love is there
    That cant escape…
    What seems like a dream…
    Up and down in love
    Nails pinnin da heart….
    Feels like no other
    As breath been taken…
    Love…Love… Love
    Mind swirlin as walls drop
    Time stops…..
    Wonderin why
    What da hell….
    But the love is there
    A pain shoots within
    Makes u want to hide….
    But loves by ur side….
    Hand in hand u walk dat line….
    See words don’t pass
    Just loves aroma….floats in da
    As u unfold ur heart…to….
    Let da pain out….to receive
    A new love…twisted in emotions..
    Tears burn da face….a desire of two
    Lifts into one whole….
    da love holds….tight
    break it down 4 u……..
    love holds a bond in da soul as
    a magical mystery of a mystery
    motions in and invades da mind…
    as a mystical event takes place
    mysterious feelins
    flows thru da veins….magic ponds
    da surface….and meaningful
    cries motions da heart in
    set notion…..
    as a pain so bad feels so good
    exhale….as da love takes u in…
    da black rose unfolds….
    unknown to da world….
    But bold and beautiful
    She stands unto u
    As da love takes hold……
    So where do ya go from here?

    blkangel thang
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah my sister
    this is a nice drop
    much love to you
    on this tight scribe
    very nice
    Peace
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was true love yearning.

    Nice.
     
  4. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: TO mzblkangel

    This poem about love and life
    Is quite tight and for me right
    I love a good love poem
    Your poem is awesome
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beyond tyte...this is magical....
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is interessthing.....beautifull..









    keep writing sweety :heart:




    Liberty..
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so happy you like my write....
    thankz for your love and support my sister..Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset..thank you glad u enjoyed..much love to you

    watzinaname..yes indeed..love is a mystery within itself..thakz


    and thank you...much love to you..it meant alot you like my poem...Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ladt thankz for the love....
    Peace Angel
     
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