Black Poetry : Love's Melody

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  1. UnknownPoet

    UnknownPoet Member MEMBER

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    I touch you
    You touch me
    I take you
    You take me
    To our loves melody
    Such sweet symphony
    Ain’t nothing like you,
    Your love’s sweet melody
    Ain’t nothing like you
    Your body’s calling me
    ~
    Your love,
    My love
    Such sweet symphony
    Your moans,
    My groans,
    In harmony

    I whisper my love
    You call my name,
    It’s like an orchestra,
    Sounding like an orchestra..
    Love making
    Music playin
    It’s takin control of me
    Love, take control of me
    As I caress your body
    With your love,
    Overwhelm me
    Just listen baby,
    As the music plays
    We’ll make our melody
    Moaning in harmony
    I’ll show you baby,
    Love….
    It’s ecstasy..
    Watch baby,
    As I record our symphony.
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UnknownPoet:
    This Love's Melody was Beautifully and
    Passionately laid and played.

    Peace
     
  3. mizjoice

    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hummm.......this poem sounds like it should be a song, set to a melody. good write.
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Alrighty-then!


    This was like Barry White with L.T.D. FEATURING YOU!

    I agree with Joice. This is some "Quiet Storm" stuff right here!
     
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    Beautifully written unknown poet, your words are the sweetest melody.



    epiphany :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can hear the music ringing in notes of sensual love like sweet sounds afloat
     
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