Black Haiku : ...Loves Like Candy...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loves like a candy
    sweet, and then sometimes bitter
    loves like candy

    loves like the ocean
    rough, and then sometimes gentle
    loves like the ocean

    loves like the street
    busy, and sometimes calm
    loves like the street

    loves like a lemon
    sour, then a sugary treat
    loves like a lemon
     
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    love like the night air
    the stars shine from the heaven
    love in the moonlight
    Peace

    Hey LovelyG
    I am loving your Haiku
    Love can make you hungry :)
    this is wonderful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love is love of me
    sweet humble and kind soulful
    to da mind of heart

    love is bitter yet
    kind in wholesome wit flava
    a tasty sweet treat
     
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