Black Poetry : loves killing us softly

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Aug 18, 2003.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:[/color]



    Copyright © 2003
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this was bone chillin amazing jus [email protected] thats it lol :)
     
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    wow
    i feel the mystery
    the creative exposure
    seeing the amazing illustration
    adds to the mystery
    in your flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "e v e r yday
    e v e r ynight
    e v e r yminute"

    the pain ripple throughout the seconds
    as lesson after lesson
    tells me
    this love session is over

    "...THEY SAID SHE SANG A GOOD SONG
    THEY SAID SHE HAD A SMILE
    AND SO I CAME TO SEE HER
    TO LISTEN FOR AWHILE
    AND THERE SHE WAS THIS YOUNG GIRL...

    anyway.:)

    the river runs deep.

    THANKS for bringing it.:)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte flow coco!!!!:D Im lovin it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now u chill me here very tyte scribe sistah CoCo
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where can l start?
    with *whoa* this ish wuz all that...
    you chose the perfect color...silver (or gray)
    b/c it's "caught in the middle" of black and white, other words,
    2 sides.

    this was just bangin period...
    *wow*
    :jawdrop:
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco......................WOW,

    I relate..........................

    this was real..................if I might quote you for a minute...

    Feeling it "Souldeep"

    Angelicsage
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This pieces was like ...WHOA!

    This piece speaks volume isn't it just a shame that love is sometimes misguided and unrequited?
    Loved the melancholy flow yet tranquil resolve of this piece...
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    Coco-

    Night kissed Day and created long interludes of passion unspoken, but here in this piece, you've said it all.

    Simply adorable.
     
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