Quiet Poetry Lounge : Love's Imagination...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Thandiwe, Apr 17, 2001.

  1. Thandiwe

    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love's Imagination

    Is Love just imagined
    An un-reality
    Feelings not yet endured
    surrealistic pillow dreams
    tickling my mind
    with it's pleasure feathers.
    Is Love just imagined
    A mirage
    A thirst in my deserted heart
    Whetting my soul
    Becoming a river
    Of still waters.
    Is Love just imagined
    Hallucinagenic
    Inhaled breaths
    Of sweet spoken words
    Digesting every syllable
    wrapped in the vowels.
    Is Love just imagined
    the blurred reality
    Of feelings endured
    On sleepless nights
    When the clanging alarm clock
    wakes you from Love's slumber.
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Write the words Poet...write the words.

    BE
     
  3. Thandiwe

    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Heartbeat, still working on it...

    Love's imagination
    crystal clear
    awakened from the darkness
    the ones that held me so tight
    comforted me, supported me
    crack of dawn showed me
    clearly the mind's game.
    Love's imagination
    sends you soaring
    higher than flown before
    exploring beyond the boundaries
    being comforted by the clouds
    perhaps even blinded before
    by the sun's brightness.
    Love's imagination
    Intoxicating as chocolate
    making you crave
    it's smoothness, sweetness
    devouring more than healthy amounts
    now just melted fascinations.
     
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    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love's Imagination

    Love's imagination
    the heartbeat
    sometimes out of sync
    dancing to seperate notes
    out of tune with each other songs
    un-harmonious love.
    Love's imagination
    the Soul's music
    the guiding beat
    that keeps our biorhythms
    searching for the right melody
    that makes Love's orchestra.
     
  5. Thandiwe

    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey People!!!

    I see that some people are reading.

    let me know how you feel, you like it, hate it, feel sorry for me (there is no need :) ), give me some feedback here.
     
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    Thandiwe...

    Oh "Loved One", my sistah...I've read this peace several times...each time being so unable to articulate my true emotions. I enjoyed it from the start...felt it...and continue to love what you are doing with it...The piece...like life/love, is a work in progress...

    keep taking it higher ~ I'm feelin you. Thank you.

    A

    :heart:
     
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    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Alyce!

    "Life is not measured by
    the number of breaths we
    take; but by the moments
    that take our breath away"

    each deep breath cleanses us,
    with each inhale
    more life comes to us.
     
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    Very nice, Thandiwe

    Best one yet!!
     
  9. Thandiwe

    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really...

    You like this one best?! And you connect with most of my stuff. Well, you know friends are my source of inspiration. ;)

    Welcome!

    Feel free to add on, if you feel the flow...
     
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    For real I felt it! I was like dayum! ;)
     
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