Black Poetry : love's house

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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stand amidst the ruins and rubble
    of a destruction built for two
    even in the haze and fog of
    what must be war and wonder why
    I still hear and feel the rumbling
    thunders of wrong thump and throng
    the earth around me relentlessly
    filling my senses with it's violence
    understanding God's intentions
    of love's house being rebuilt
    I consider the current atmosphere
    the entended design
    and am puzzled at the notion of
    what blocks like bricks to build with
    even the material of such building blocks
    and from the limits of my mind's eye
    this does not look like a place
    nor a time for building
    I think "love"...
    well I need truth and honesty
    to mix and mold the bricks to hold such love
    and communication and devotion for
    mortar to bind such bricks together
    I would need character and courage
    for the design
    and all the odds and ends in between
    and it seems critical to me
    that such a house needs two to rebuild
    yet all there is I see is me
    and God as the everpresent foundation
    so yet again in faith I feel through
    the haze for the first blocks to lay
    and guess I leave the rest to God...

    04/03/03/Michael
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy:)
     
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    this was well posed and beautifully laid out
    flow on poet!
     
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    Thanx Rich. I appreciate
    any comments from you brah.
    Peace to ya!
     
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