Black Poetry : Loves Hold.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Love

    My King

    As I sit here..
    I watch the sunrise many times
    And the moon open up
    I say your name a thousand times
    Rehearsing lines..
    As I write your name cross my heart

    My soul vision has took on a new look
    The day you took my hand
    And brought me to your land
    I never learned to give my self
    Until I meet you

    You’re my winter snow
    My summer heat and spring flower
    As fall joins the rain
    You’re my storm
    My heart beat stops
    But your love brings it back
    Each and every time
    As love connects us

    A year today marks
    As you spoke them words
    I LOVE YOU
    And laid the law of us
    Through lines of devotion and vows
    Playing my harp
    Giggles and shy smiles
    Blushing away…saying I am all you need
    And we are closer then ever before
    Stronger then and ole oak tree

    Remember….
    When I didn’t trust you
    But we had all night conversation
    Joys of laughing crying and comfort
    It was a sign then
    When I was scared to speak these words
    Now they come so free….
    I LOVE YOU
    When I was scared to release my feelings
    You held me tight never giving up
    Well now its different
    I AM IN LOVE with YOU
    And aint no holding back no more
    Its time to release it all

    The beauty of you pulled me in
    Surrounded me and crushed my wall
    You became my muse
    My every thought
    My dream
    My lover
    My mate and all mine….look what time gave us
    Time inhaled us and love gave us this chance

    The sweetness and meekness of your voice
    Brings loves vibe that embraces me
    Through and through...fills me up
    You’re my sunshine my moon light
    My Angel you are
    Dreams are dreams
    But I found a real dream when you found me
    In our chamber up in the orbs

    See they say love don’t love nobody
    Well I can stand and shut that
    Love loves somebody
    You and I our proof that love is true
    As you took my hand
    And gave me of your land
    Wonder of a wonderland
    My Love
    My King……
    I say your name a thousand times
    Rehearsing lines..
    As I write your name cross my heart
    Thank you for loving me as you do
    And letting me know I am special to you
    My Angel..
    I am IN LOVE with YOU
    And I know we are TRUE

    My love this is your poem

    (C) 2004
    suga bear files
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow sistah like dis beat ...........
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks........happy you likes

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it sound like it was me in the line of dis coz i am who i am
    u really created a masterpiece on this one
     
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    Yes my sweets you are who you are....:ilu:

    thanks for the love and support Richie Rich...:wink:

    happy to know you think its a masterpiece.....
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :pool: this was on point nice drop
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: for da love n support
     
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    This is a beautiful dedication and you know how to lay it out as always!

    :hearts1:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love
     
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    when loves hold this one here tells the story
    and i'm still in love wit it .....
     
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