Quiet Poetry Lounge : Loves High

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 23, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is an inclusive piece, dedicated to no one, or responding to nothing..... Just something I wished to share.

    It’s not just you that takes me high,
    But the love we share together
    that elevates my mental spirit
    deeper than any smoke could
    no matter the flava of the drug,
    But if you’re curious.....
    You want to know
    what it is that I feel
    when I feel for her
    the way I do
    when I tell her
    that I’m feeling you,
    Ok.....
    In hopes you’ll understand
    the best I can do
    or even tell you,
    Is to find you a phat joint
    maybe a blunt for some,
    Spark that thang
    then sit back and just chill,
    Now let a lil time past
    this is when a feeling will come
    it’s called the munchies,
    A craving so intense
    only for a taste
    of something truly particular,
    And when you get it,
    Quenching that desire
    it’s the best you ever had,
    If you can relate
    then you feel a tenth
    of what it is I have
    when it comes to wanting her
    being lost in that haze of essence,
    But trust me
    it’s as close as you’ll ever know
    until you find a love of your own,
    That takes you on a natural high,
    See her ways & persona
    are so addictive
    I would be a fool
    to let her go,
    And let another one find
    what it is
    to be high because of her love,
    Having her in my existence
    induces a sensation
    that nothing artificial could give,
    I have no intentions
    on passing this love to the left
    holding on to her
    is what I hope to do,
    Or at least
    for as long as I possibly can
    until she tells me
    it’s the end,
    Where my Love’s High comes down,
    Because finally with no regrets
    sadly we’re through....

    Caramelpython
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are indeed deeeppp
    verrryyy
    touching a place
    that mental deepness
    can not help
    but go with the flow
    of the vibes
    nice indeed
    Peace
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man well said
    flow on dis was
    awesomely deep
    and felt
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo I appreciate the honesty and depth of this piece. the point is good and so is the flow.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with the above family...
    it was very well posed....kepp on flow
    bro...:Angel:
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Family... My Destee Family Thank you for the kind words. It is true Loves High is a beautiful yet sad truth to alot of relationships. I guess sometimes the soul need to bleed out and release it's self into this wonderful form.

    Ty Rich man you are always on point
    Blue what can I say to a marylander? This in state love is great.
    gemps... you are welcome but the thanks are all mine now.
    blkangel?? you have inspired me when i have needed it the most
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blkangel?? you have inspired me when i have needed it the most

    as you me...thank you...you are a poet i know first hand...with love always...Angel :kiss:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Job well done, it had a lot of class to it...I like the way you laid it all out.
    very good...keep the pen in motion.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A high that you never want to come down from, and when you do you would do anything to feel it again. As the poets before me said, deeply scribed.
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother Python

    You are such a versatile and talented voice. You can switch gears in a millisecond. I really, really enjoyed this piece.
     
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