Black Haiku : Love's Geometry

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This love thang is crazy!
    So crazy I am about to loose my mind!
    Crazy?
    Crazy!

    For the geometry
    of love's psychology
    lead me
    to 1 + 1=3
    for love + love = love2pain
    for love is no game
    this is serious ****.

    the equation...

    is often fliped
    from me + you = we
    to me + my = I
    and selfless love
    turns to selfish love
    the taker takes
    all the giver has
    even the giver's self
    at least the giver's love

    the fraction...

    tends to indicate
    the love turns to hate
    when i give 100% of my love
    for 20% of your love cause
    your lack of sharing you
    with me
    and taking parts of we
    has left me pissed
    to 100/5ths of the
    highest level of pissivity!

    so the subtraction...

    becomes my goal
    as i welcome a black hole
    of loneliness
    your former love nest
    as i cancel your existance
    and remove the 20% of you
    from the 100% of we
    and i am reduced to 100% me
    for the we
    is no more
    you hit the door
    and 1 + 1 = 2
    for love + me = pain
    loneliness
    rejection
    tears
    sighs
    and whys.

    but addition...

    tells me that this love lost
    when added to my wounded soul
    will teach me
    how to see
    another bad
    love geometry
    when it comes to me
    and my 1 + 1 = 3
    will remain 1 + discernment = free
    and i'll do the math
    that subtract your no counting ***
    and 1 + 1 will = me.
    free and in love with me.
     
  2. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hell! K u got the equations down pat! nice scribin'!
     
  3. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thx poet
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's what I'm talkin bout.........
     
  5. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shout it out zorb!!!! shout it out!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis what i call perfection !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This all adds up to being a classic. Love don't love nobody, got to love self, and hopefully you'll know when true love comes into the equation. Geez, this was tight!
     
  8. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sis!!! k
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's a awesome piece I must say and I really enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing this one with us.
     
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    indeed had to hit dis one up again as i read it for the 10th time
     
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