Black Poetry : Loves Doors

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Feb 13, 2007.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who made love this blissful yet so tainted of an emotion?

    Constructed from feelings and thoughts that can cause a commotion
    spread across our ashy lives like we need lotion

    bragging, complaining, dazed, maintaining, written, spoken, touched, hope'n, borrowed, stolen, secret, sacred, broken, lustful, financial, trustful, open, types of love were holding.

    Who made love this blissful yet so tainted of an emotion?

    How can one word carry so many different concepts and ideals, So many pains and joys
    So many people not wanting to feel, so many conflicts between girls & boys

    So many bonds broken and created between women & men
    When did this journey of love begin?

    You can have love of life or love of spite
    love of ice or love at a price.

    Ghetto love or love of art
    religious love or love of smarts.

    e-love or love to hate
    Pain is love so love won't let me wait.

    love can be both give or take!

    I knew you didn't love me or you love me 2 much
    Love can be blind but it's still braille to the touch

    Love is said to be "RED" but it can also be "GREEN" with envy
    What kind of love makes another befriend me?

    I have love 4 my nukkas
    Some don't have 4 no nukkas

    I have live 4 my Full Figgas
    Some only have love for skinny figgas

    I say I have love 4 both but Fugg that though because I'm a Full Figga nukka!

    Some only love in sections
    love in selections
    love only certain races
    only certain faces
    only certain colors
    and no love for no others
    some have fake love give up fake hug's
    just out on the take so they just rape love!

    Some make love after they break up
    Some break up after they make love

    Some awake love after a break up
    Some wake up after a make up

    How much more can this love thing take up?

    Now we all have love so watch what you ask 4
    Love is a House but that house can have a trick door!

    JBG
    Caramelpython
    Jagged-Python Productions Inc © 2007
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Hey Hey...
    My rattle snake returns, good to see ya back in the house.
    I see ya still sliding and gliding quite well.
    This is a awesome display of "Love" brother. thanks for spreading the love.
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    first let me say whats up love? and i love this strong piece of yours. and i still got a poem in the mix for the one you wrote about me. wink, wink
     
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    Love...on the surface, the word conjures up feelings of beauty. But so often, the word has mixed meanings, almost opposite to what the word is supposed to evoke. Thank you for getting deep on this poet. I miss your poetic scribes.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome splash bruh
     
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    I finally get the pleasure. I've read
    your name on numerous occasions.
    Your piece was so on point Love has
    so many doors. This piece really
    touches me. Thanks for the wonderful
    read.

    Much Love
     
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