Black Poetry : LOVES CHORUS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Nov 15, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i shought refuge in his arms
    his hands warmed as he carressed
    my deepest thoughts and moans
    issued from my mouth
    "make me ponder the definition of your existence"
    i got loved that night to the extreme,
    he made my groans stab the air to a chilling death,
    i exhaled my stress,
    and forgot all limitations,
    that night under the crystal stars,
    that only could gap at our melody,
    and it was only u.



    note to the family:heh, heh, heh, guess whos back? :grin:
    hope u like,
    -story
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this
    alot...it was hot
    cant wait to read more...
    much love
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl, this is dope! where you been?? I missed ya. welcome back.
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall, im a little rusty on my skillz though, but im glad u like it.
    love,
    -story
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl...yes your are back...

    and you've been missed...

    this flow was all that...
    groans & moans...stabbing the air?
    and crystal stars?...you know how
    to take a sister there..all wrapped
    up in your words...
    tyte as always
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey angelic nice to be back as always,
    thanks for the love,
    -story
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my :hot: lol
    shes baaaaaaaack :D lol
    dont be no stranger gurl keep it comin ...wit ya exceptional self.
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, i've missed u gurl, thanks for the comment,
    peace,
    much love,
    -story
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh: glad you back
    making peolpe :blush:
    :spin:
    don't gow up to fast:laugh:
    let the flow pour:sand:
    Peace
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey blue, i try to stay within my age limit, but sometymes...*sigh*...ya know a sista jest gots to go there....lol
    much :heart:
    -story
     
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