Black Poetry : Love's Awakening

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  1. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    “Le Réveil d'Amour”

    Blessure été si profondément
    Été seul si longtemps
    L'amour a marché dans ma vie
    Elle chantait votre chanson

    Elle a couché ma tête
    Elle a fermé mes yeux
    Elle chanté votre chanson
    Mon ignorance a rendu sage

    Mon coeur a sauté un battu
    Mon pouls a commencé à se faner
    Ma respiration est devenue faible
    Les pensées de vous me coupent comme une lame

    Maintenant, ma tête est suspendue bas
    Maintenant, je m'assois et moi le pin
    Cette femme douce, douce
    Mon 99.9




    “Love’s Awakening”

    Been hurt so deep
    Been alone so long
    Love walked into my life
    She was singing your song

    She laid my head back
    She closed my eyes
    She sung your song
    My ignorance made wise

    My heart skipped a beat
    My pulse started to fade
    My breathing got weak
    Thoughts of you cut me like a blade

    Now, my head hangs low
    I sit and I pine
    That sweet, gentle woman
    My 99.9

    By Monetary
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just when I thought "love poetry"...
    had done all it could ever do for me
    it's presented in french...
    and with the utmost melody of sincerity
    The flight of love's magic song...
    touches all who are open to it

    Thanks for touching me...

    Beautiful...Absolutely Beautiful!
    ~Sage~
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read:
    O............................
    .......................................My

    lol

    well alright now brotha this was superbly touching...your "99.9" :read: hmmmmm

    wishing you the best :)
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It matters not what language it's said in...it still comes out "love"
    with a 99.9 by your side, you have the right to be sitting on top of the world.
    Very awesome piece poet, I have great respect for your pen.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQn..............

    I want to thank you for letting me know this...

    I love when you do what you do and then share your hearts desire

    but can you stop tellin our business :playball:

    But for real this was awesome please share more it was refreshing just to read you again been so long.... :smooch:


    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Awakening

    I like this poem. Very nice. :skate:
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Penning sweet phrases in not one but two languages. Very nice indeed Money. Flow on brotha.
     
  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart skipped a beat
    My pulse started to fade
    My breathing got weak
    Thoughts of you cut me like a blade

    Now, my head hangs low
    I sit and I pine
    That sweet, gentle woman
    My 99.9


    ^^^^^that was smoothe bruh.....just smoothe....
    now lets aim for that 100 percent one...lol.....

    nice peice....good flow
     
  9. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A money production huh lol.
    Thanks for sharing bruh.
     
  10. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My goodness! Brotha brotha brotha! French is the language of love and this piece, whether in English or French, personifies that very fact. Preciate ya!
     
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