Black Poetry : Love's Apology

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  1. Heartfelt

    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is not really a poem, I'm just expressing my feelings for someone I fell in love with.

    Keasha,

    I know things have changed for you, but my heart isn't ready to give up the love that I held close to it. I know you want me to stop living in the past, but honestly I can't stop. My mind reverts to the thoughts of the conversations we had and the many times we told each other how much we loved one another. I can't forget that because it meant so much to me.
    It's hard for me to move on to something new when you're all I have in my mind. I know you don't believe it but I wouldn't lie to you about something like that. I have yet to respond to you with a 'good bye' because I'm not ready to let you go. I've tried but nothing works.
    I met you over a year ago, and when I did I never thought that I would fall in love with you. I never thought we could make it this far as friends, but I had a dream that we could make it further as lovers.
    I'm sorry I caused you emotional pain, if any at all. I apologize for making everything get carried away when I talk to you. I'm sorry that you feel the way you do about people and life now that you've grown up and learned to follow your heart. I'm truly sorry that I can't be the one to make things right or be there if you felt you needed someone to talk to. More importantly, I'm sorry I fell in love with someone who doesn't love me too.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa this speak loud and clear
    da heart is in whispers of apology
     
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    nice letter
     
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    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $RICH$ and mzblkangel.
     
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    Beautiful letter of apology.
     
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    Heartfelt

    This is a powerful letter..

    " It's hard for me to move on to something new when you're all I have in my mind. "

    " I'm sorry I fell in love with someone who doesn't love me too. "

    I been here.. don't be sorry.. actually rejoice. They were there for a fraction of time.. and needed to move on. Never meant to land. I see things like this now, as a messenger.. Love, once delivered. They ( that one ) may never come to my address again.

    Icandi.. had me dancing with my skeletons.. in her post. 1st Sight.. now here. So I know it happens yet those that it has never happened to can't understand.
     
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    PEace, THis is a sweet honest letter, I truly like this. BLess
     
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    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for reading and replying. I'm sorry I didn't get to you sooner.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all good this flow was awesomely tyte
     
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    beautiful from da heart
     
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