Black Poetry : Love's Angel

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blk Kween, Mar 28, 2001.

  1. Blk Kween

    Blk Kween Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seen through the windows of his soul
    From the chambers of Love’s home…
    She dances

    At the blink of an eye,

    As sound,
    As swift as a thief in the night
    Love’s Angel,
    Vanishes
     
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    Awright Kween this was short but deep.....I feel your flow on this one......I do expect to see more from you my sweet...

    Bish....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AT THE BLINK OF AN EYE
    LOVE'S ANGEL VANISH!
    AND IN THE SUBTILE OF LOVE
    U SEE THROUGH THE SOUL
    AND WHISPER IN NAME OF HE
    FORTH SHE BE IN THE CHAMBER
    OF HEART......BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
    ON SUCH A SHORT NOTE .............
     
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    feel'n this one too
    ... deep

    very nice BlkKween
    want'n more of your flow

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    so much expression, with so little words, tight.....
     
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    Kween dat was short, deep & Sweet ma!!! had a smooth flow! LQQKIN for more!!!

    Respect
    Reas
     
  7. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...

    To the point and so full of meaning; and thorough within its meaning; hot piece, poetess... :hot:
     
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