Black Poetry : Lovers

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  1. mailman2468

    mailman2468 Member MEMBER

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    There is a love that cannot be understood
    A love that is felt in the deepest of souls
    So deep it sends you out of control
    This is were most of us try to be, it’s a feeling between life and death
    It’s the middle of heaven, with that someone else
    It’s the part of us that cries for no reason at all
    That feeling in a dream the one were you fall
    It’s the one that makes you smile to yourself, as your walking down the street
    A love that makes you says now I lay me down to sleep
    Such wonders of the feelings of ones being
    Is a treasure to behold for at that time you are seeing
    The light
    The feeling of a birth of a new born, the touch of your first love, saying that you’re 13 and half, telling someone I love you
    These are things that are true, things that we all do
    When you can’t part from that love one, when kissing was the most important thing to you, talking on the phone until dawn
    Waking up in the morning with a knowing nothing can go wrong
    Remember all that makes you feel good and leaving things that don’t, belong
    There is love in the middle of you soul, no matter your age, from young to old
    It’s a love of sharing a love of paring all feelings that are true, deep inside of you
    Happiness is inside no matter what life we live; you are the only person that can make it happen
    It’s a feeling that so strong, nothing can be wrong as long as you can feel it mind body and soul
    It’s a gift we should cherish more precious than gold
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i likes this really
    wow thankz for sharing...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u pose a greatness in ya pen very nice drop keep flowin
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really really like this - you capture the timeless flava well
     
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    this was a tyte scribe dude...
    flow with da love
    one love
    khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You expressed some incredible feelings...wow!!
     
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