Black Poetry : Lovers Suite Masterpiece

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nahshon, Mar 9, 2008.

  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Sep 20, 2001
    Messages:
    373
    Likes Received:
    131
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +132
    Skype:
    Nahshon.Swanston
    sometimes we
    float around each others cosmos
    trying to find out
    What's in each others mind
    during different times
    we float around each others mind
    trying to find out
    what it is...or what is was...
    what we mean or meant to each other
    only to find out
    that what it is...isn't what we thought it was
    and what we thought it was
    was not just a mental thing
    more than a desire for biological interchange
    so we float around each other
    trying to find out
    what kind of chemistry might be found
    hoping to heat beyond 69
    plus 28 degrees
    temperature transmits emission,

    Intermission

    We thus continue
    messing around to find
    what makes one chemically
    inclined to another
    to find out
    that, what it is...is what it is...
    just an emotional thang coupled with the need
    or desire to satisfy
    intimacies of the opposite kind
    XX for the XY
    where we're inclined toward
    a close encounter of a different kind
    type of encounter
    where you lose your mind...for a little time
    lose your mind
    while vertically aligned
    to each others skin
    feeling that sweet sweaty funky
    kinda sin...sin...sensation
    arousal awakens the need for extra attention
    for the areas that crave affection
    DO I NEED TO MENTION THEM BY NAME???
    that arch in your back
    which has been begging more than gentle kisses...
    what it misses is a roughneck rubdown
    done the right way
    releasing tensions of a cold rainy day
    maybe you just feel the need
    for a warm embrace...
    the kind that makes you forget
    time, place, and the problems of the human race
    where deep eye gazing
    allows soul penetrating vibrations
    causing emotional exhalations
    accompanied by sweet whispers in your ears
    a coronation of poetry
    with the sentiments that release inhibitions and fears
    allowing a closer connection
    than just skin to skin
    where hearts race...pulses pace
    in synchronous beat
    raising passions heat
    to another level
    where there are no lies to be told
    where two lives can unfold
    to form one
    maybe though at this time
    you're seeking a coronation of a different kind
    the kind that happens to
    the inner sanctum of your thighs
    where entrance is granted
    for one blessed to speak in tongues
    a cunnilingus-linguistic
    DO I NEED TO SIMPLIFY MY VERBIAGE???
    Just picture a constant clitoral vibration
    oral stimulation
    that makes the sweat bleed from
    the back of your calves
    while I'm holding the two half moons
    of your round...MMM
    till you feel the full thrust
    of my tongue in your pool
    arousal has never been so cruel...
    girl i'm not playing no head games
    not playing no head games
    unless your willing to play with me
    you got to just taste
    what's been patiently awaiting to enter you with ease
    ready to please
    while you're on hands and knees
    then we will see...
    what makes one cosmically inclined
    to another
    only to find out that
    what it is...is, what it is...
    and what it was...was, what it was...
    and what it will be...is, what it will be...
    which may encompass
    the spectrum of souls, spirits, minds and bodies
    till climax comes while lying naked in bed
    sharing intimate thoughts
    as lovers and friends
    long enough for the moment
    to wisp into an eternal memory
    of a lovers suite masterpiece...

    Nahshon-Rae 12/07:SuN017: :hearts2: :qqb003: :qqb015:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    And a masterpiece it was. The slow titillating pace of this piece, not just stimulating the body, but the mind as well. Strategically written poet, welcome back.
     
  3. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Sep 20, 2001
    Messages:
    373
    Likes Received:
    131
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +132
    Skype:
    Nahshon.Swanston
    Thank you for your kind comment. Thank you for the welcome back...couldn't help being away for so long...had to straighten out some aspects in my life...
     
  4. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 10, 2007
    Messages:
    996
    Likes Received:
    18
    Occupation:
    Finance & Endless Possibilities
    Location:
    Midwest
    Ratings:
    +18
    Excellent flow! I agree with Sis Watz...the slow escalation was Awesome! Not just physically but emotionally as well!
     
  5. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Sep 20, 2001
    Messages:
    373
    Likes Received:
    131
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +132
    Skype:
    Nahshon.Swanston
    Thank you Destiny...I aimed to please mentally as well as emotionally...
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 2, 2006
    Messages:
    1,915
    Likes Received:
    53
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +55
    Nahshon:
    Somebody get me a fan....
    PURE FIYAH!!!!!

    Much Luv
     
  7. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Sep 20, 2001
    Messages:
    373
    Likes Received:
    131
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +132
    Skype:
    Nahshon.Swanston
    Thank You...

    Thank you everyone that had a chance to read and comment on this poem...I wrote it one morning waking from a dream while incarcerated on Rikers Island for a misdemeanor assault...I am glad you've enjoyed it...
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    May 25, 2001
    Messages:
    4,182
    Likes Received:
    170
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Spreading Joy.... need some?
    Location:
    Sixburgh, Pa.
    Ratings:
    +220
    Oh my goodness!

    This was an incredible stimulating read in more than many ways.
    Every time I declared a line my favorite the next one ruled it out!
    I enjoyed EVERY LAST SYLLABLE of this THOROUGHLY!

    Talk about hearing LIVE.. I can get with that

    Well done!

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    indeed this was masterfully done as a show piece wow !
    great scribing
     
  10. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 14, 2006
    Messages:
    1,034
    Likes Received:
    28
    Occupation:
    I am a student, and all though it is hardwork, it
    Location:
    East Coast
    Ratings:
    +30
    Hi Nahshon...


    This was very yummy and special....
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Lovers Suite Masterpiece
  1. Khasm13
    Replies:
    3
    Views:
    190
  2. 1poetsought
    Replies:
    1
    Views:
    371
  3. chuck
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    238
  4. MS234

    Black Entertainment : Lovers by Babyface

    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    300
  5. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE
    Replies:
    30
    Views:
    2,628