Black Poetry : LOVER'S LAMENT

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Somehow , someday i knew
    that i'll live ever happily too
    in the lament of loving you

    I once feared my love was lost
    buried on a forgotten shelf coz
    i was so rap up into myself
    til that day u spoke in vow
    gave my soul a tender smile

    then we came from two
    wit gentle words of " I do "
    soft spoken I love you
    unlike the moon or crossin stars
    my love was bend deep in scars

    later i started to rise
    to this new love's suprise
    not masked in her face
    but a place my handz can trace
    as i circle her structure

    taken back to a lament
    from the last spoken statement
    give me u, and i'll open too
    show u love where love is due
    comfort , caress and treasure you
    in the wink of mystic truth

    I knew my love wasn't bottled up
    it was just lost and stuck
    til she open the vault of concealrd
    mental & hearts thoughts

    until next time i'll tell you what
    love now has brought something
    every heart and mind sought
    from a lover's lament lesson taught.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right now i am feeling this deep in a way it can't even be explain
    the depth and impact of that one emotion called love is so powerful
    within its self...this was a gentle and soothing scribe i found comfort in reading it...Angel
     
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    More beauty

    YEt again you have managed to scribe another beautiful piece.
    I think I may be running oout of good things
    to say about you.
    You truly are inspirartional and you inspire me took seek growth.
    Thanks for schoolin a sistah in the finer points of scribe.
    :bus: :bus:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, the things that love can do, when we least expect it, I get what you mean. Such a genuine sweet scribe brotha. Do flow on.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Brother Rich
    How you do indeed
    Bring on a warm smile

    You are bringing to light
    That permanent seal
    That can come
    When you're in love
    And the love is returned
    Wow...
    WONDERFUL :)

    Peace
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice Scribe
    Always diggen your drops
    keep them coming
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As i read this i looked to the sky for the beauty i might find there, rich you are what your name is, rich inside of your soul, for you truly know the meaning of love.
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Angel for the feel of this piece

    Thankz Bluewater for the warmth and love on this

    Thankz THEONE for the gentle visit within

    Thankz Watz for feeling the lament of love

    Thankz Soulful2006 indeed u are a blessing

    Thankz poetic justice your words humble my soul in awe

    Happy family y'all was able to enjoy and feel the treasure of my mind poeticly..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The lament of love is
    the heart & soul of
    emotions that's felt
    deep within the spirit

    only lover's know !
     
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    This piece was on the money.
    Love smakin us so hard it aint even funnny. :yesno:
     
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