Black Poetry : Lovers Intuition...To you from me

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  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No grounds for termination
    Between you and me
    Call it lovers intuition
    But its quite plain to see

    I wasnt accepting applications
    For playing the dating game
    Not trying to deal with the frustations
    That these tired playas bring
    But you made it in to the equation
    And I welcomed the interlude
    Funny...
    Neither of us wanted a situation
    But I KNEW I wanted you
    No time for complications
    As sure as 1+1=2
    We realized we had a connection
    Then the relations....ship ensued
    Through communication, dedication
    Fornication and all
    We've stuck together like glue
    Despite the occasional frustration
    It's plain to see
    Call it lovers intuition
    No grounds for termination
    Between you and me
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're hired!
     
  3. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanks we'll just call the position filled
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece had a wonderful rhythm and rhyme to it. And the way you posed this, something not planned, just happened, and it's working out just fine. Flow on poet.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz, thats the way it was. defenitely wasnt expected
     
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    We always get the unexpected when we least expects it...wonderful flow.
     
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    the unexpected have its great surprises with it..feeling this poet...nice drop
    likes the vibe fo sho....
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for commenting queen and angel, i am just going to go with the flow and hope for the best
     
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    your welcome sometimes thas best....good luck
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice tyte write
     
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