Black Poetry : Lover Take Me There

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NEVER
    Let good loving go
    Soulful in the know
    Heart pure as snow

    God,
    I love you so...

    Living in life's undertow
    Yearning to be loved

    Where do lovers go
    But to call up home

    Deader
    Gets no better
    If the heart ain't right
    Love insight man alright

    Loving who be loving you
    Don't be fooled
    Resolute ~
    Keep your
    COOL

    Broken heart surrender
    Heaven holds
    You dear,

    Embraced
    By Grace

    Lifetimes
    Are spared

    Given that fact
    What's here
    To fear?

    Lover,
    Take me there


    Darryl Abdu Omari :grouphug:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ make love
     
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    Dear Brother Poet 1poetsought,

    PHENOMENAL!! I mean...WOW just WOW! I am seriously blown away by this piece. In the short time that it has been posted, I've read it several times, never quite deciding whether I choose to believe the subject of the piece is speaking about/to an earthly lover or about/to God directly.
    Love this piece! Thank you for sharing.

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe brother you mastered it well
     
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    Never let good loving go
    Soulful in the know
    Heart pure as snow

    God,
    I Love you so...
     
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    can you feel my heart composing
    love for your inner ear
    the wistful peace in you replacing
    my memories with new dreams

    for if there only be but one
    more place and time to grow love
    let it be here and now with you
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a beautiful sentiment, my dear.

    Perhaps, the lady would accept

    my sincerest gratitude. :flowers:
     
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    Please take me there....Very nice....
     
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    Thank you.

    (smile)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For you, you and you.

    :SuN019:
     
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