Black Poetry : LovelyG & $$RICH$$ (mental Mind poetically love)) collab

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LovelyG....
    I've secretly thought of you
    subconsciously in my dreams
    ignited sweet thoughts of you
    And me together in this dream
    I've never seen your face
    But i often begin to imagine
    The touch of your embrace
    written vividly in your passion

    First time i read your poems
    it seemed to be a gentle kiss
    you had my feelings open
    wishing to feel your soft lips
    I knew I shouldn't even feel
    This result so passionately
    I can't even begin to reveal
    The things I wanted to be

    because I am so in love
    And incredibly happy
    My Risen Savior from above
    sent my soul mate unto me
    But if you think about it
    A soul need two things
    To be loved in the spirit
    And to be loved poetically

    so what does this mean?
    Am i in love with you?
    I think it's your poetry
    written boldly and true
    it's like like you converse with me
    Through every dingle word
    Beckoning unto me
    To dance with you in my words

    I don't think it's any thing wrong
    To be in love with ya pen
    A feeling this strong
    cannot be for pretend
    I pray you feel the same
    so honest and abundantly
    Cuz every since you came
    My poetic life feel complete

    some people may say
    That this thought is crazy
    But all i say
    is that it can really be
    I never even thought
    you could love poetically
    And it's like real love
    Except the feeling is so free
    your feel completely full
    in your poetic feed
    didn't know you can pull
    me off my dragging feet
    sometimes i'm feelin' down
    and you are what i read
    it's like a have crown
    and poetically i'm ya queen

    $$RICH$$
    Deep inside my mental
    poetically vision u many
    times before not sure who
    you are but so gracefully I know
    of your soul and the love u hold
    so dear, but yet u lite my fire
    in the vision of u and me
    just a mild walk holding handz
    I often imagine your warmth
    the secret of your touch
    and a burning compassionate feelin
    runs through me

    Many days & nights i feel u near
    beckoning my comfort to cover u
    and within grasp of my heart
    my love boils at 360 degrees
    I've felt your pain
    I've heard ya single cry
    many time before i kiss u from
    the sweep of the wind that brace
    ya lovely skin to dry that tear
    and even i know it will never be
    but yes i have u poetically in heart
    know your love is not mine
    continue to crash my mind

    that first flow the piece u pose
    to was a beauty a warmth of a rose
    i smile and knew ya soul was free
    and a love thats unconditionally
    i've watch ya pen many times before
    it was like heart stoppin and more
    a soul need to be loved
    I've tryed to express it long ago
    how i can caress and embrace
    i felt u kiss me and your touch
    a tap on the back and even sat
    in my lap inside those beautiful eyez
    was a real suprise of amazement
    i can even start to say what i feel
    but i know it's all real

    and i ask how can it be
    my love speaks and say
    poetically
    some will label me crazy
    but i know for da spiritual soul
    ya a beloveth pot of gold
    and to the treasures u gave me
    the key to unlock a rapture
    these vision will last even as
    time may pass the emotional
    feelings of what it can be
    only my eyes truely can see
    your sunshine gift
    and lustful smile is felt over
    many miles the beauty u pose
    i've embrace see and know
    my look on the face
    and when we flow i am in bond
    a bliss two of a kind
    i relax just to entewine

    I feel the directional maze
    and the heart i crave
    so i am in love with ya pen
    yo poetry calling me in
    from above i fly a flyte
    but i watch u day & night
    the feelin' feel so right
    poetically u wrap sweet & tyte
    it's like skin touching skin
    deeper and deeper we blind
    inside the heavens above
    ur made to be loved
    nubian goddess queen
    hear the song my heart sing
    never knew one can feel
    the same make it real
    so sweet and honest fill with hope
    and abundantly
    is my confess and a only request
    to have and hold forever and whole
    mentally
    not sure what u make say
    or how u feel but hope u only
    understand my heart and my hand
    i scribe and place it on the table
    hope ya heart is ready and able
    musing in ya rapture of beings
    poetically i am ya magical Royal
    KanG.....
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D:D:D
    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    i didn't know u were gonna write all that rich:)
    it was beautiful...
    :kiss:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to the one whom so be
    i can write forever to thee
    poetically sprayed
    mental display
    emotional of feeling
    of da pen
    da magical ink drip & laid
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i just read ya pm.....:)
    YOUR MY POETIC HUSBAND!!:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    TO DIS DAY I DEE WED
    PEN N' PEN
    TO HAVE AND HOLD
    TO CHERISH IN CHRIST
    FOREVER AND A DAY
    UNDER THE GIFT SO BE WRITTEN
    POETICALLY INK DA DROP
    TURE LOVE CARESS DA SPOTS
    MAY THIS BE AND BE OF THEE
    INSIDE OF VOW YES AND WE
    VERY PROUD KING & QUEEN
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love the vows...:)
     
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    hee hee hee...poetic husband.

    Well call it what ya want, y'all, but this flows sooo smooth. Lovin dis collab. :)
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this nice yall really nice...
    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gempis .......... it's a mental take over in a visional moment

    blkAngel.......the mentally mind runs sometime hard to catch
    up with and when u do all kind of display have flash

    thankz y'all
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks gempis and angel:):):)
     
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