Black Haiku : Lovely denial

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  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smart comments from you
    tap dance on eachother's nerves
    I think I love you
     
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    dancing hearts within
    like harmony of a quest
    that's looking outward
     
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    Drawing near to you
    Constant bickering the clue :argue:
    Falling in love too...
    :luv:
     
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    I fuss cause I can't
    admit love, hate seems present
    my heart knows the truth
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    spine feels the rhythm
    love..tap dancing with your feet
    just a nerve away
     
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    Foot stuck to the flow
    the other lodged in my mouth
    love makes me helpless
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Lodged in the mire
    no room for another bite
    thank God you can write
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I write in the dark
    searching for courage to help
    admit to the crush
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    heavy is the crush
    flattening tormented heart
    get off it...and breathe
     
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    normally I would jump right in with a haiku, but this thread is just crackin me UP! :laugh: :laugh: Please y'all, don't stop tap dancin on each other's nerves. :lol: :lol:
     
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