Black Poetry : LOVELORN'S HEART

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Icy winds
    come again
    bringing frost
    to Lovelorn's heart.

    Sun rises and
    breaks through
    hard edges of long
    since forgotten passions.

    Caressing hands kiss
    the opaque darkness
    of where a heart
    was lost.

    Falling dew drops
    grace Lovelorn's
    hungry face
    and holds it in its
    sweet embrace.

    Giving in to unbridled
    passion,
    Lovelorn sinks in
    to lustful greed
    and succumbs
    to blissful elation.

    Not one desire
    will remain
    untouched, unearthed
    or unfathomed.

    Heaven has opened up
    and swallowed all
    of Lovelorn's
    misery and pain.

    Giving Lovelorn
    a chance and place
    to at last rest
    an oh so weary heart.
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful Sierra. Nice work!
     
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    wow..is so Lovely..wonderful
    Peace
     
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    Your style has become a force to be reckoned with
    Your voice; supreme!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is an absolutely BEAUTIFUL poem girl!!!
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Angelicsage, :wave:

    :thanks: so much!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Blue, :wave:

    I appreciate your beautiful thoughts!!

    Much peace to you!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
  8. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1Poet, :wave:

    You are making me blush!!

    I am so grateful for your sincere sentiments. Truly, you have made my day brighter!!

    All my love to you!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Lovely, :wave:

    Your warm remarks make me feel blessed!!

    Thanks so much, girl!!

    Peace to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very moving & touching flow
    dis piece is beautiful as da heart u pose
    u go gurl !!!!!........................................
     
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