Black Poetry : Loveless

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  1. jelli

    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why hasn’t love found me?
    I’m not that hard to find you see.
    Is it just a fluke or stroke of bad luck?
    That love has not given me a single look.
    ‘Just be patient it will come’, I’ve been told.
    But how long can I wait for love to knock at my door.
    Could it be since I’ve moved a few times,
    Love thought I’ve changed that address of mine.
    But my heart’s still here empty as ever,
    Waiting for my first love endeavor.
    Maybe this is just some cosmic joke or test.
    Could it be love thinks I wont give it my best,
    Maybe love thinks I’ll fail you see
    When love finally comes to visit me.
    Whatever the case, I’m tired of the wait
    I’m beginning to think that this is my fate.
    That I am destined to be, loveless you see.
    Not ever feeling loves pleasure or pain,
    Not ever feeling loves guilt or shame.
     
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    is it betta to love and lost
    than to never love?
    some people have felt none of the above
    but the curse of the first
    stings the worst
    a bit of info
    until someone satifies your thirst....

    peace
    khasm
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember this feeling, just have to stop thinking about it, it snuck up on me by surprise, thats how it happens, nice piece, I felt it
     
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    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats how it is happening to me. I got through spells. Hopefully it will pass soom. :(
     
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    I know, but it'll come...


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely love will come unto u
    and love is of thee i vision it
    every so near dear love on da rise
    in da 7th star
     
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    jelli....i've felt this way since i was 15...it is NO fun at all...but love comes at the most unexpected times, and sometimes you can even overlook it..when it does come for you, embrace it, but always keep some for YOU in reserve
     
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    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You, know I had a line in this poem about waiting since i was 15 years old for love to grab hold but I took it out.
     
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