Black Poetry : Loved... like that

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved
    (Like That)


    I want to be loved

    I want to be loved


    I

    want

    to be

    loved
    the
    way a woman
    needs to be loved
    completely
    (including)
    the
    not so pretty
    woman you may see
    at times during mood swings
    when things aren’t the way they should be
    with me

    when
    a time or
    few I don’t feel like
    doing the womanly things
    you feel I should
    do

    I
    want
    to
    be
    loved
    then
    too

    loved…

    to
    the point of
    over-standing it’s a momentary thing
    women go through

    its
    not to irritate
    you

    I
    want to be loved
    enough…

    to
    warrant
    compromises to keep the
    peace

    I
    want to
    be loved the way
    a man is suppose to love
    a woman


    loved like…

    you
    willing to
    give your life so I could live
    love

    I
    know
    it seems extreme

    but…

    could
    you love me soul deep
    that you would entertain the possibility
    of going to that
    extreme

    or…

    soul
    deep that
    the little things won’t matter
    as much…

    can you?

    I
    want
    to
    be
    loved
    enough

    that…

    you
    would work at us

    with me

    at
    all
    cost

    so…

    we
    could
    grow old and
    grey and still be in love
    (together)

    I want to be loved

    I
    want
    to be
    loved

    I
    want
    to be loved…


    like that




    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved like…

    you
    willing to
    give your life so I could live
    love

    I
    know
    it seems extreme

    but…

    could
    you love me soul deep
    that you would entertain the possibility
    of going to that
    extreme

    or…

    soul
    deep that
    the little things won’t matter
    as much…

    can you?


    --------------------------------------------------------------​

    I would Love you
    like there's no tomorrow
    da kinda love dat forever showers
    in da depth of hearts
    A
    Love
    that is beyond measures
    A love
    where i would
    yes"
    lay my life on da line
    so
    U can live & shine
    upon da brightest
    starz
    a love dat's
    soul deep
    to an extreme
    where it calls
    ya heart to comfort
    without judgement
    yes , yes , I
    can
    Love u just dat much
    to where only happiness matter
    to see ya smile
    yes i can
    yes.

    I enjoyed this and couldn't help myself i felt da flo like a river of beauty
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    coco:
    Now that's some kind of love. Beautifully Expressed!!!


    Peace,

    4EVER
     
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    Whew, Sister Coco!.....Now, THAT is some GOOD lovin'!









    And when you find this man to love you like THAT, ask him if he got a brother or a cuzzin or sumpn!
    LOL!
     
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    such an inspiring piece...

    THANK YOU for the inspiration.:)
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Sir Richness...



    I am so loving your flow. Its soul-romantic! I thoroughly enjoyed the whole, but the underlined lines touched the most! Thank you so much. I'm glad you felt it, because it allowed me the chance to feel you and it felt good!:)

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4Ever, I’m pleased you enjoyed the flow.:)

    CherryB, it would really be some kind of wonderful to be loved like that.
    I’ll keep you in mind should I find the man of my dreams.:)

    Baller, You have inspired me on many occasions the least I could do is inspire you a time or two.;)

    Thank you all, your presence is appreciated, BIGTIME!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    i love this beautiful expression of yours!
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Nevar...

    I'm happy to know you enjoyed the read. Hopefully in my lifetime I'll be blessed to be loved... like that.
    Thanks for coming through to show some sistahly love, its returned, BIGTIME!:)


    Coco:heart:
     
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    Whoaaaa ...
    Now that's the way we wanna be loved :D ...awesome piece sis :toast:
     
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