Black Poetry : Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Apr 8, 2001.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been pouring all day
    But yet you wait for me today.
    A fire lit room
    I'll be there soon.
    I walk in the door
    And there are rose pedals on the floor.
    I look into your eyes
    And in relief i sigh.
    Tears start to come down
    But you hold me in your arms now.
    You tell me it's going to be alright
    But it always seems like a fight.
    You lift up head
    And to you my eyes led.
    You leaned down to kiss me
    I let my feelings go free.
    My lips softly suckled
    As I am cuddled.
    Your tongue inserts my mouth
    As we lay down on the couch.
    I can no longer remember this day.
    I love you so much I say.
    I'm safe now in your arms
    All I see is stars.
    I feel warm inside
    In you I can always confide.
    Your always there for me
    I hope you see.
    I love you so much
    Especially feeling your touch.
    Goodnight my love.
    One_Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THIS REMINDS ME OF A SWEET NIGHT OF LOVE
    A SHOW I LONE TO PLAY THE STAR ROLL IN...
    BEAUTIFUL
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You just blew the breeze of gentle love onto this page

    Thank-you from the God of love and wind

    *Beautiful peace*
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice description of love most def One!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one

    you got a lot to live for cause you're beautiful
     
  6. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys......what can I say except it's from the heart.
    One_Love
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely Lovely!

    Love is a beautiful thang huh? diggin ya work ma!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REASON

    Thanks for the read Reason!
    One_Love
     
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    This piece is beautifully written one-love....
    Flow on sis...flow on..

    8th!
     
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