Black Poetry : Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetrymama, Aug 20, 2005.

  1. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    expressed well where love floatz
    before i tell you , what you gonna
    do this it when i do , will you laugh
    or pose a heart feel the love off da
    start how it drift deep and take hold
    i'll tell it all in whole .....................

    I really like how u did this one just created to perfection sista
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scary to let those words out not being sure of the outcome, yeah, what ya gonna do, exactly. You expressed those feelings to a "T" poet.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin' yo vibe, Sistah.
     
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    this was def. tight. Heavy D.was on rewind.lol. its sad, but most people dont know what to do w/love once they have it.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love, to be honest I once new what that was but now I wonder, is it just simpley a feeling of happiness that later turns to pain and sarrow. Or is it a feeling of confussion cause the thing that you have infront of you just is not the same because of the sentual feeling that you share with someone that is laying next to you. Love hell I am still confussed.

    Nice piece though
     
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    This really made me think. I started wondering for myself, I know I want it, but just what am I gonna do when I get it?? Dilemma Dilemmma!!! I gotta work on the confuion. Great poem PoetryMama, really thought provoking
     
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