Quiet Poetry Lounge : Love?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BrownEyed Girly, Jul 9, 2005.

  1. BrownEyed Girly

    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He makes me wanna climb
    Underneath my covers
    And deal
    Just deal with
    The frustration
    Pain and hurts
    Charging at me
    While my head is covered
    Donned in flannel
    peach
    and
    grey
    I
    love me some him...
    Toni Braxton croons
    And i find myself swaying
    back and forth with every verse
    I know this song
    Word for Word
    I lived this song
    Word for Word
    Until somebody pinched me
    He me wanna HOLLA
    Throw up both my hands
    Like Marvin
    I get a rush
    Like Paula
    And then I'm BACK
    Again. :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within the flow of destee's
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i embrace wit love

    this was tyte and Browneyed girly that journey
    can be sweet yet painful but at the end you will
    uncover a beauty .........look to read more of u soon !

    welcome to the family
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love can move us in and out of so many emotions. I enjoyed this piece--welcome to destee, hope to read more from you.
     
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    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both for your sweet feedback. I look forward to posting more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we are so honored thank you keep flowing !
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright you throwin out some mad throwback songs off in this joint. I love that song by Toni braxton too! But I have to change the words to I love me some her. I liked the piece. Welldone!
     
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