Black Poetry : LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulrevision, Sep 19, 2003.

  1. soulrevision

    soulrevision Member MEMBER

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    Love
    Who knew that something so sweet
    Could turn so bitter
    A feeling that can lift you up from the deepest valley
    And place on the highest summit
    Could easily drop you from its graces
    You’re my best friend
    And sometimes all I want is you
    But some days I wish I would have never met you
    You can make the strongest man cry
    And the most independent woman needy
    You've brought me
    Happiness and pain
    As much as I hate you sometimes
    I would never ask you to change
    I even question myself because of you
    Like where do I go?
    What do I do?
    Until I find myself back in front of you
    Kissing you
    Hugging you
    And in the end I still miss you
    Wishing I could control you
    But in the end realizing that I cant control
    Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love work in crazy wayz
    control can never be
    the heart is the center beat
    i love the way u control dis flow
    had me in awwwwwe ! from da start
    keep flowin' like da flava u pose........
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like your flow....
     
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    thanx for the luv... i was especting replies so fast
     
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    most welcome ......ya flava is tyte
    bring more of dis .....
     
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    I most definitely will. I havent been in the mood to write cause of school stressin me, but I will drop some of my old work around.
     
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    bring it on !!!!
    relax a bit don't get stressed out
    i'll be in the old MISS... in NOV.
     
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    the tragedies of love indeed are harsh but the uplifting moments...are all the more defined after you've been through the storm...:)
    flow on my brotha :)
     
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