Black Poetry : LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tcb233, Sep 11, 2003.

  1. tcb233

    tcb233 Member MEMBER

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    LOVE

    I looked at you pass and felt your vibe,
    Your tenderness, your humble yet hungry attitude.
    so into your heart I thought I would see what was scribed.
    you had everything i needed and my eyes were glued.
    What ppower do you have over me and why is it like that,i ask myself over and over show me what is this,
    now i lay next to you and this is where I am at,
    stroking your face ,touching your hand and feeling such bliss.
    And now as I look to the sky and see your eyes,
    Now look down and see your face, I see just this,
    our love is forever and for nothing else I compromise,
    I take you as my wife ,forever, sealed with this kiss!!!!!! :heart:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    happy u join us in flow to share ya wisdom:)
    this piece of LOVE u scribe is felt in da vibe
    flow on ya home:D
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    hey tcb
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome:wave:
    enjoy yourself
    nice vibe..hope u share more:toast: :wave:
     
  4. tcb233

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    Thanks

    Thank you for the love and there will be more to follow, thanks special to mzblkanel for directing me here, and to Rich for thanking me and making me feel welcome here!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    enjoy the new home u entered and nice to have u
    as family ya flow is awesome and smooth
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome. Tcb233.

    I recall who directed me here. Anaksanamun.

    She told of a place that flowed with love and support. I had to come and see. I rarely visit the place she posted the invite. Destee is all she expressed and more.
     
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    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was hot I like the way it flowed together....The rhyme skeem was unique and traditional at the same time...I'll be lookin out for more.
     
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