Black Poetry : Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lahana Mysteria, Jun 3, 2003.

  1. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Have you ever heard me call your name,
    while your eyes roamed the dream world?
    Did you feel my fingers tracing love letters across your skin,
    while your self contained breeze caressed the satin around my thighs?

    Elevated conversation,
    both you and I,
    did you understand my tears falling into your hands?

    I would love to feel you inside of me again.
    I must walk away and know how you will never know,
    the depth of this love that lives,
    and breathes each time I am alone with my thoughts.

    Do you hear me calling your name?
    I ride with this wind,
    and leave echoes trailing in the distance...

    You have my heart,I am yours
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome ............tyte flow
    the way it was posed wit gentle motion
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice

    Ahhhh,
    so nice! Riding the winds of love such a wonderful thing..... Enjoyed the read keep expressing yourself.

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soft yet intense write, Poet!
    peace to ya!
     
  5. geminit

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    ..."I would love to feel u inside of me again..."
    What a very words!!!
    so sweet, so sad... :(
    I feel the same in this moment,
    so maybe I can understand their meaning...
    ...peace unto u and keep flowin with this emotions
     
  6. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DEEP--DEEP--DEEP,
    u dig n e dipper and u'd b in China!lol!
    n e ways, just wanted to complimant u on a job well done,
    keep up the good work..........
     
  7. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is a mixture of sweet and sad,
    soft and intense,
    in it's gentle motion...

    In a way I must dig deep all the way to China and then dig deeper all the way back :)

    I thank everyone kindly for the words...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love...no matter how it's written it's always exciting.
     
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