Black Poetry : love...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rico, May 30, 2003.

  1. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love...anger...hurt..pain..tears...crying..asking why..wanting to die...waking up with no sleep...looking in the mirror getting thinner...questioning...wondering...screaming...praying to a God that is not listening...hoping...wishing upon a star...anxiety...want...need...happy...joyous....crawling into a ball....ready to climb the walls....listening but not really hearing...thinking are you here....are you really gone....not wanting to go on...dying inside...living a lie....smiling...but not really....seeing...imagine...life..without you...newness...starting over...but not believing....in love at all...

    :(
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rico...Thats it in a nutshell.... :toast:

    WELCOME TO DESTEES!!!!!
     
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    word...i felt all of dat
    and den sum

    nice first scribe...keep flowing
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!

    welcome Rico to destee's poetic playground
    welcome to a love u just found
    welcome to our home of joy as we feel ya flow !!!
    dis piece was on hit please flow on wit it welcome:)
     
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    I feel u on this...If you ever lost love this is the poem that completely expresses it.

    Very original.
     
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    Agreeing with all, you lined it up then nailed it. tyte!
     
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    yes love evokes so many emotions...its powers are unrivaled so we search from ocean to cean for an aswer to why it hurts so bad ad why we lost what we thought we never had...very nice...welcome to loves expression at destee
     
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    Felt... the pain so real
    Love the way you deal it
    Letting others feel it-

    1poetsought ~
     
  9. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to all for taking an interest in my poetry...this is my first time ever posting on the web. I am going through a tough time right now and writting helps release those feelings
     
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    angelicsage said it best very "original" Rico my heart feels ya beat :) I know the pain we can heal together ...and theres no better place than DESTEE's :)
     
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