Black Poetry : Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Apr 27, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talking about love
    Transends all common boundaries

    I'm talking about the love
    That's overwhelming like a fload

    A channel and a passage
    That flows endlessly

    I'm not talking about the conditional
    But the unconditional

    Ability to recieve

    Love

    Passionate
    But not entirely physical

    Talking about
    The love that never dies
    Even to the grave

    A rose of eternity
    That never dies
    Never fades
    Never ceases
    Never withers

    I'm talkin about the love
    That rescues you
    Changes you
    Love that frees you

    When you wake up in the morning
    Love is profound

    Till the point
    Where you are so consumed
    By it's presence
    You are engulfed in it
    You don't have to reach for it or look for it
    It's right there in your bosom
    Right there in you heart

    Liberal love
    Love,
    Where there is peace
    And love is patient and kind

    All the things that the bible
    Says it is

    Love that even after death
    Makes you want to go on

    Because love
    Real love
    Never dies

    It's awake
    It's alive
    It's free
    Love makes you do things
    That you didn't think you could do

    Love that makes you do
    Right
    Instead of
    Wrong

    Love will keep you
    Love will remind you
    Love, real love
    Will be kind to you
    Love will never lie to you
    Love will only tell you the truth
    Love never dies
    Love never dies
    Love never dies

    Because it's eternal
    Even beyond human life

    Quenching your thirst
    As you hunger for love

    You no longer
    Want lust anymore

    You want the real thing
    You want love
    Unconditionally...

    Desert Storm
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PEEP

    NICE LOVE POEM GREAT WRITING GIRL LOVING THIS YES IT'S LOVE AND i'M LOVING THIS ALSO
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou

    Thanks for checkin this one out. Drifting away again. I dream too much. But it's good for my soul.I see some things that people don't see. And still I remain this passionate type of dreamer womban~child.I'm gone start singin Janet in a minute. lol ~I GET SO LONELY,CAN'T LET JUST ANYBODY HOLD ME~ You ARE THE ONE WHO LIVES INSIDE OF ME~ It's All love, Thanks,Madd
    Desert Storm
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORMY.....

    say dat **** lil sis!!... i am feelin' every

    single word of your flow on dis one hea!! indeed!

    have i told you lately... it's as if you are

    growing & spreading your beautiful poetic wings...

    right before me eyes??!! ... i am so proud!! :)

    NothinButLove...
    SunShyne~
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stormin' it down as only you can do it like this, dear poetess. i'm lovin' it!

    ~~freeinyomindasyouletitflo~~
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne

    Yeah sis,I'm glad you can see me progressing. I really appreciate you spottin me like that. Stay true.
    Lister,you comin thru. Thanks so much,good lookin out.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NOW

    THATS RICH KINDA LOVE
    THE WAY U SAID IT IN DESPLAY
    MADE ME FEEL SO WARM AND WELCOME
    INTO YA HEART....
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm,I'm glad you feelin that way. I'm glad I could make your heart smile. Be blessed. Much love.
    Desert Storm
     
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    This love...

    ...is, truly, unconditional. *Wishin' I will, one day, receive love this true...:)*
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is...

    YOU.
    as you open the door of insightfulness
    and share a kiss
    of your soul with
    me and them and him
    and all those who know and don't know
    that love is free

    thanks for explaining it so well.

    muchlove.
     
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