Black Poetry : Love Ya

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Oct 23, 2005.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Through tha thugs
    Through the hustlas
    Hurts and the lies
    Through the criminals waitin fa my demise
    Breakthrough
    Believin me through
    Hot like fire
    Princess
    my name is
    And precious
    Within
    THrough the struggle
    Through the pain
    Through the trouble
    You held my tender frame
    There's no one to blame
    Shhhhhhhhhhhh........
    Hear that?
    It's the silent effect
    I'd breathe on ya fa a moment in time
    To share affection with ya
    So real this time
    Knowing what I want
    Hugging the BIBLE to my chest
    and the psalms
    That sings to my spirit
    Freeing me at last
    The struggle made me shine
    It made me mine
    It made me think
    It made the well run deep
    THough I was scared
    You were there
    I'm home once again
    Love ya dear
    ya hear
    Trying to express
    Wouldn't fit
    Surreal, ya I know what you think fa real ...
    hmm...
    Life just keeps teaching
    And life just keeps preaching
    I go to class once again
    Learning even though I try to pretend
    Humbled one time
    Thank ya
    Thank ya
    Thank ya
    Thank ya
    Once again.

    D.S.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVE the humility of this peace, Desert Storm.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was just awesome peace of work....flow on because you found the peace so many tries to find....


    Angel
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great piece and feeling it's warmth
     
  5. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE DROP I'M GALD THAT YOU FOUND THAT PEACE YOU WERE LOOKING FOR SO PEOPLE DON'T EVER FIND THAT THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have found a serene love that embraces the soul, and what can compare to that? Great flow.
     
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