Quiet Poetry Lounge : Love Ya To The Soul Sista

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by gradulism, Nov 22, 2001.

  1. gradulism

    gradulism New Member MEMBER

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    "First an explination. My mother once told me, after I told her I was in a REAL relationtionship, that REAL love is loving someone even when you hate them, even when they have crumbled your foundation. With that said my poem."

    BYE YOU,
    BEAUTIFUL QUEEN,
    MOTHER OF PRINCES, BRINGER OF WATER,
    HOLDER OF LIFE STRENGTH, UNITY, SALVATION,

    SKIN OF BLACK PEARL, EYES OF SUN RISING AT MIDDAY TO GREET ME, SECRETLY.

    TREE OF LIGHT FROM ROOTS OF LOCKED HAIR.

    MY AFRICA IN PLUTO'S ORBIT, EVEN IN YOUR DISTANCE,
    SUNLIGHT WARMTH ON WINTER MORNING.

    PHYSICAL EMBODIMENT OF ALL SENSATION AND EVEN... TEMPTATION.

    SOULSISTA HIP-HUGGER BELLBOTTOM WEARIN STARBURST CREATOR. KEEP BANGIN FOR THEM JIVE-TURKEYS.
    FOR THAT I LOVE YOU...

    I LOVE YOU WHEN I LOVE YOU
    I LOVE YOU MORE WHEN I DON'T LOVE YOU NO MORE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said poet!

    welcome wit ya beautiful write
    to da house of destee's place:toast: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi gradulism
    Very deep felt.
    It indeed made my heart sigh.
    Much love to you

    Peace~N~Love

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this kind of love never dies for it's soul deep. Greta scribe to bring back Sister Bluewater.
     
  5. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love last line lines and this one, "I LOVE YOU MORE WHEN I DON'T LOVE YOU NO MORE." Is the truth. I think it shows how real love is eventhought we can erase people out of our life or try to forget about them. Yet the fact remains that we were made from God and God is love. In the endgame it seems that love will always survive even if we don't. I will second brother rich WELL DONE & FLAWLESS POETRY!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mayne, this was sharp. :weights:
    Real strong. Real strong..

    Love.
    Desert Storm
     
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