Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOVE VS. HATE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Apr 24, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Love
    Is about devotion and commitment
    And
    Not word association

    Why is it that the mention
    Of
    One word
    Can cause such distress and frustration

    If all I have to do
    Is
    Say a word
    And
    You give up control

    I still love you anyway
    And
    Feel compassion toward you
    For
    Letting the demons feed so on your soul

    Some
    Sit around
    And
    Just stay mad

    That’s like
    A
    Boat without a sail

    But hope is never
    Stagnant
    Because tru love never fails

    I can say
    I love you
    I can say
    I hate you
    And you might beleive that's true

    But
    Love and hate
    Is not in what I say
    It shows in
    What I do!
     
  2. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MYYYY MY!
    Lad You are putting in some Poetry......Love versus hate is a Forbidden gmae CONSTANTLY played
    You captured the Moment and Let the Heart show truth!
    FLow
    on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Actions do speak louder than words. If one says I love you, yet does hateful things, then the words just don't hold up. Penned on point.
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Love
    Is about devotion and commitment
    And
    Not word association"

    I agree! You know this might be why people can't put love into words. It's because they haven't come to grips with the word love itself. Nice Flow!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep scribe and on point of truth when love is on da right path beyond
    da twisted roads of not understanding what love really is ...flow head on poet
     
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