Black Poetry : Love Vibin'

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I held her hand gently in mine
    to start a union so pure that
    causes hearts to cry rivers of tears
    because “this” just feels right

    Tenderly in silence, I led her to
    my love’s entry, where surely
    she would cross over and close
    the door behind her so she could
    feel

    warm…
    safe…
    &
    loved...


    in the comfort of a strong, blak brotha

    Oh how I adore her!

    She makes me want to please her every
    wish so she could know that dreams do
    come true for those with true hearts
    for those who love

    deeply…
    compassionately…
    &
    spiritually…


    If this is to be our inevitability, then I’m
    certain that I must make her feel like she’s

    wanted…
    needed…
    &
    treasured...


    Cause I’ve got so much love to give to her
    especially when she reciprocates in kind

    And then…

    We kissed with the tongue of our souls so
    that the next plateau reached would gracefully
    solidify our bond

    physically…
    emotionally…
    &
    sensuously…


    allowing us the pleasure to feel as we are
    one entity from the beginning until eternity’s
    indefinite end

    And next…

    We made love to the sounds of our own hearts
    beating together in counts of two; her own single
    beat; then my own in

    slow…
    deliberate…
    &
    sexual…


    avowals of commitment to one another; the kind of
    lovemaking where our orgasms birthed orgasms…

    Can you feel me feelin’ you?

    Yeah, I just love this love vibin’…

    (C)GQINC2K2​
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm mmm... i just love this love vibin' my **** self!!

    i ain't even gonna ask you where the hell you been
    ...'cause you'll probably give me some answer that
    is equally as unacceptable as your **** absence! :tongue:

    i loved the flow tho'... but you knew that i would
    when you decided to post it! :lol: i've missed your
    soothing words... (that's RT)

    itsallLove, chile. (bighead ***!!) :D

    elayne.
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Tenderly in silence, I led her to
    my love’s entry, where surely
    she would cross over and close
    the door behind her so she could
    feel

    warm…
    safe…
    &
    loved...

    in the comfort of a strong, blak brotha"


    I like that. :)


    Scribeaboutit! It helps
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  4. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q!!!

    You killin me dog!!!

    "the kind of
    lovemaking where our orgasms birthed orgasms…"

    and this... "allowing us the pleasure to feel as we are
    one entity from the beginning until eternity’s
    indefinite end"

    that's just too cold!!!

    Skillful ****
    Reas
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Q.... man ya bringing it too da table strong
    ladies he's just warming up !!!

    out look .............(((HOT)))
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gentleman of Quality

    :eek: I could go on and on and on... Hatz off to you and that love thang you do




    One
     
  7. epiphany

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    Very, very nice GQ..:toast:
    thanx 4 sharing..

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx poets for your kind words....

    :peace:/:heart:
    GQ
     
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    now see, I'm shirking my responsibilities just so I can read this stuff. So much love on one Page definitely has a way of overstimulating my senses. And those verses Reason mentioned... yeah, me too! (see alyce needin her "boo")

    wooo!

    alyce
     
  10. mojo

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    You definitely saying what some can't find the words to say. (and anything that makes Ms. A fiend for her "boo", gotsta be funky!)

    Say that stuff, brotha!

    MOJO
     
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