Black Poetry : Love The One You With

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love the one you with
    you've heard it before
    I've tried it
    been there done that and still trying it
    Loving the one I am with

    Love the one you with
    even when it's hard
    even when you've been used, abused, lied to, dogged to the ground and hurt beyond repair
    Love the one you with

    I am trying to love the one I am with
    been doing so for so long it's harder everyday instead of easier
    Especially since the one I am not with is the one I love

    Loving the one I am with
    when I love you

    Loving the one I am with
    when I am desiring to be with you

    Loving the one I am with
    when I am craving to feel your touch and kiss your lips

    Loving the one I am with
    when I want to be in your arms

    Loving the one I am with
    when I miss you ENORMOUSLY

    Loving the one I am with
    even though I think about you morning, noon and night
    breakfast, lunch and dinner

    Loving the one I am with
    even though I am still and always will be
    so very very much
    In love with you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love da one u wit !!!
    a master scribe to da heart
    love this piece .................
     
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    love reading love the one you with it :spin:
     
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    Must be hard loving the one you're with if the one you're with is not the one you love. Sometimes we have to be reminded of the things that brought two together in the first place. Well written flow poet.
     
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    Imaging, applying all that love to the image in the mirror, which is the only way to move toward the one you love...
    oppose to, loving the one you're with.
    nice drop, thanks for sharing it
     
  6. Intrepid

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    Thank you sooo much family.
    These feelings were actually very hard to put on paper
    So thanks again sooo much!
     
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    re:Love

    Very straight forward poem. If you don't love him :garbage: but if it is worth it all :kiss2: stay
     
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    I like your remix on a very old cliche which is love the one your with. Your piece definitelly point out the truth of the matter which is you can only love the one you truly love. As they say there's nothing like the real thing! I can attest to that myself. Excellent work though, and i really enjoyed your words.
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the support everyone
     
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    Unfortunately, the dichotomy between the one you are with and the one you truly love, is no mere scandal, but a way of life.
     
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