Black Poetry : love that woman....

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... when she is weak
    when she is strong
    rather her hair is short or long...
    love that woman
    when she is skinny or fat
    rather she is lily white or pitch black
    love that woman
    if she is short or tall
    rather she is obese or small
    love that woman
    b/c she is God's gift to the earth
    giving life through birth
    not so quick to grace magazine covers
    or sexy enough for Hollywood lovers but l ask- do they know a real woman's worth?
    l see the beauty in you- do you?

    love that woman.
    woman- love yourself.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l wrote this wanting women to appreciate who they are,
    what they look like, how much they weigh (naturally), where they work and regardless of how many men used them, abused them and how many you slept with,,
    looking through God's lens and why he created You (and only that in itself), you're beautifull so live like it. :wink:

    p.s,,
    normally don't do these type pieces, but l guess it was necessinary <------ :D
     
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    love that woman
    b/c she is God's gift to the earth ...
    yes indeed it was necessary and i am thankful that there are women such as yourself who can set such a fine example for so many....to me there is no limit to a womans worth, i love you all whether short,fat,skinny or tall.....
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l'm all man, trust...lol

    glad it's felt from one poet to another :toast:
     
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    J'hiah, just reading the previous posts, lol....I thought, no I "knew" u were all man...thanks for the clarifying that.

    But, getting back to my remark: I do, I do see the worth that is in me...I'm always reinforcing to other women that if your strong and beautiful on the "inside" as well as keeping your game tyte on the out, feeling good about yourself, educating yourself...hungry for life................Men will come running, they really do...The good ones will not only love you but respect and support you. It must start from within, it's like a magnet it will pull that special someone into that confident beauty you've found within yourself! It's not difficult for someone to love you when you love yourself; it eliminates a lot of complications.

    You speak on truths that I advocate for...No one can validate or invalidate a true woman except for herself! She will always rise!

    THANK YOU, so much for submitting this...you are officially on my "Coooooooooooooool list". (ps. sorry for the novel, lol)
     
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    I agree ....j'hiah

    You nailed this one. Women are special. They are the opalesce, the brilliance of life.
     
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    Bless,
    We as the original womyn need masterpieces like your poem. Thanks for ya recognition. Nice flow Poet. PEace and LUV
     
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    Blessing this is beautiful within the words of a true prophet.
     
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    I love this poem.Call it narcissism.lol.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my brutha u sho nuff laid it out on dis one ...............tyteeeeee!!!
     
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