Black Poetry : Love that was lost.......

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love that was lost
    Love that was lost
    Love that was lost
    Lost at your cost
    I say again, "Love that was lost"

    Those old feelings I use to have for you is
    returning
    And I'm yearning for things my eyes shall not see
    My ears are stretching to hear your voice again
    And my hands are burning to touch your face
    Every time we talk you remind me of the past
    Our past didn't last
    So why rekindle love that was lost
    Lost at your cost
    You say you miss my smile
    You miss my touch
    You miss the way I give it to ya
    All that was lost
    Lost at your cost
    Mind saying no, but my body
    My body all over your body
    Getting naughty
    I must realize no matter what I can't do this
    I must resist the notion
    To let you swim
    Between the devotion I have for another
    He will discover
    Why I changed
    Pretty soon I will be calling your name
    And things between me and my love won't be the same
    Why
    Why
    Why because of you?
    I still love you
    But not in love with you
    I love
    Love
    Love that was lost
    Lost at your cost
    I'm confused I must bury these old feelings
    Two wrongs don't make a right
    Two wrongs don't make a right
    Right
    Right
    Just this once it won't happen again
    or will it
    Can I
    Turn my back
    Decision
    I must choose
    If I want to lose the man in my life
    The one who wants me to be his wife
    Over love that lost a long time ago
    I'm no whore
    My how we use to explore
    I must chose
    I must chose
    In this game someone has to lose
    Have to lose
    lose
    To the one where
    Love was lost...........

    To be continued............​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....love lost this was all dat can't wait to feel pt 2
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Real nice post Nevar
     
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    Sister nevar
    I can't wait either.
    This love must be continued.

    This flow is very nice.
    I enjoy reading your flows!

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being torn between yearning for the past, and the present mate who is offering forever. You expressed those feelings quite well poetess, welcome back. :)
     
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    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this sis, you captured the emotions of stay, go, yes and no.
    I enjoyed reading this.

    Bless up!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just always remember: "To Thine Own Self, Be True" ...and the right choice will appear.
    great piece poet!!
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow what a poem. cant wait to see what happens. dont take two steps back if the present mate wants to offer you forever.keep it movin :)
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for showing me this love......i am floored that my point was understood........thanks again..........
     
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