Black Poetry : LOVE THANG

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got this love thang for u baby and I don’t know what to do.
    It's got me buggn, going crazy cause I cant be with u.
    I pissed u off, u took your love and left me sad and blue.
    Cryn 76 days and 76 nites, missing the hell out of u.
    I got this love thang for u baby, and I don’t know what to do,
    My Body yearns for your touch, my lips miss your kiss,
    My love box craves that feeling of you deep, deep in my mix.
    Sending me on that sexual journey that I so dearly miss.
    Back arched, eyes rolling, juices flowing, screaming out your name,
    It’s like riding on an orgasmic super power freight train.
    I got this love thang for u baby and I don’t know what to do.
    Being without your love is the hardest thing I have ever had to do.
    I can give up a lot of s***, but I can’t handle giving up u.
    I got this love thang for u baby and I don’t know what to do.
    Can’t concentrate, always wanting to masturbate, because I cant feel u
    Penetrate my wishing well and make it swell like u use to do.
    I got this love thang for you baby, and I don’t know what to do.
    As I go through my daily grind, sometimes I think I’m losing my mind
    Because its always on u.
    Whatcha doing? Where your going? how your feeling? Whatcha wearing.?
    Do u ever think about me,? Do u miss me? Do u still love me?
    Will u ever give your love back to me be? Cause I am so lost without u.
    ****, this love thang that I got for u, has taken control of my thoughts.
    And making me do things that I usually would not do.
    But I don't care what people might think or what they may say.
    If they experienced your love baby,
    They would understand how and why I feel this way.
    If u were just any regular Joe, by now I would have been over u.
    Your not ordinary your extrodinary, so amazing,
    U were my dream come true
    And I would give any thing, if only u would let me share
    This love thang with u.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhh yes that love thang !

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    It's warm when your love can filter out and even sweeter when one cherish it
    i feel every line, cause i know about this love thang u got so well ...............

    again welcome within 4EVERLUV i look to read more of u soon tyte drop !
     
  3. nevar

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    love how you put it down on this one poet flo on.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love. I am such a virgin. I have been writing for about 4 years but have never really shared my stuff with anyone anywhere. Nevar amnd Rich you both are totally awesome writers I totally enjoy youwork. Again much thanks for the love. I can't believe my piece was actually posted.
     
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    Most welcome and now you can shine , flow and let the world know
    of such art and craft , we're so happy to have you aboard the family.
     
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